The Awakening of Miss Adelaide: Part Two

Welcome, everyone!

My soon-to-be-released novel, The Awakening of Miss Adelaide, required a great deal of research. It reached from the Tuscan hills of Italy, to a 1919 transatlantic passenger ship, to Washington, D.C., and back to Oklahoma.

Digging up Bones

Sometimes research for a novel can feel like digging up bones. In a way, it is.

One such “bone” I clamped my teeth around and refused to let go was an article in a 1913 edition of Fort Worth Star-Telegram. It described a murder committed in the lobby of the Metropolitan Hotel. This violent act occurred in connection with an adulterous affair. 

Consequently, heightened emotion, lowered common sense, and the control males exerted over females resulted in one man’s murder and the murderer’s acquittal. In addition, the “offending” woman’s husband dragged her home kicking and screaming and committed her to a mental asylum for “emotional insanity.”

I wondered if the “offending” man had been treated in like manner. Hardly. 

How could I NOT include this morass in a novel?

The Awakening of Miss Adelaide

Orphaned as an infant, Oklahoma heiress Miss Adelaide Fitzgerald has enjoyed every advantage. She possesses a unique gift for music and excels on the opera stage in Italy. As a philanthropist, she’s adored from America to Europe.

But Miss Adelaide is about to awaken in a 1918 nightmare.

Miss Adelaide
W
hen the Great War–and the Great Influenza–knock in Italy, Adelaide discovers uninvited, unwelcome guests. They threaten her life and alter her identity and purpose.

Snatched from her quiet life in an Italian villa, Miss Adelaide is thrust into conflicts others created. What battle scars will she sustain? And where will love lead her?

In The Awakening of Miss Adelaide, war and peace, laughter and heartache, love and loss unite. This union ignites a fresh fire that reveals one woman’s hidden needs and potentials.

What will a fresh understanding of herself require of the Angel of the Opera?

I offer The Awakening of Miss Adelaide to the Lord to do with it as He sees fitting. May this story based on the agony other women experienced serve to lighten someone else’s load by highlighting the hope and healing found in Jesus Christ.

I’ll be giving away a print or digital copy (winner’s choice) on each of 5 remaining dates: July 3, 17, & 31; August 14 & 28.

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Book 1: The Calling of Ella McFarland

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Book 2: The Mending of Lillian Cathleen

Book 3; The Awakening of Miss Adelaide

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Lord, I pray You will bless the words I’ve written on the pages of this novel in ways I can’t imagine. ~ For Jesus’ sake

7 thoughts on “The Awakening of Miss Adelaide: Part Two

  1. Judi

    I can not express how much I am looking forward for this book! The way you have written this series my be from another era but some things are happening now. I will sit down with a coke and a bag of popcorn and read the book in one day.

     
     
  2. Stacy Simmons

    What a beautiful cover, Linda. The storyline sounds gripping as well. I’m going to have to get your latest book!

     
     
  3. Alison Boss

    Oh, my! The story you found during your research about the murder committed in the lobby of the Metropolitan Hotel was gripping, Linda! What a vivid picture of the consequences one can incur as a result of your sin(s)! The Awakening of Miss Adelaide sounds very suspenseful! I look forward to reading it! Thank you for the chance to win a copy of this book!!!

     
     
  4. Alicia Haney

    Wow!! Your book sounds intriguing and like a really , really good book! I Love the cover, it is Beautiful, and her face looks mysterious. I would love to read this book, It will just have to be a must read! Thank you.

     
     
    1. Hi, Alicia. Your comments encourage me. Thank you!

       
       
  5. She LOOKS like Adelaide! I love the strong square jaw! Awesome find and but of course, it must be included! Did I miss its launch date? Can’t wait to read the third book!

     
     
    1. Hi, Caryl! Great to see you in the chat circle. Yes, I loved Adelaide when I first saw her–especially that strong jaw 🙂 Evelyne is amazing, isn’t she?

       
       

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Father’s Day Chat

Welcome, everyone

Father's Day
Wilson Freeman Brooks, 1914-1971

Father’s Day. Depending on a person’s point of view, Father’s Day conjures varying emotions. Joy. Sorrow. And everything between.

From my perspective, it stirs up the sweetest of memories. Not because I recall a lifetime of sentimental Father’s Days with the family hailing ours as the best of the best (although we knew he was). Nor because I recall a specific card or message penned through tears of gratitude. But because I remember one event involving my father–Wilson Freeman Brooks–not on Father’s Day, but on three days in the spring of 1967, days that will live in my memory forever. Even when my mind is gone, my heart will remember.

Daddy and Father’s Day


Daddy was a farmer in the Lower Rio Grande Valley of Texas. As such, he and Mr. Sun worked basically the same hours. He started farming at age 21 by working as a field hand and living in a cottage with no electricity or running water.

In a few years, he had saved enough to build Mother the brick house she always dreamed of. He was at home at the head of the table three meals per day. He drank coffee with my mother, never with the “boys” down at the coffee shop. And he never wasted a breath on profanity or off-color jokes.

He joined one organization–Texas Farm Bureau; served as an officer in four organizations–Farm Bureau, Raymondville School Board, Willacy County School Board, and the Hayhurst Foundation; and was added by God to the rolls of one eternal body–the church of our Lord Jesus Christ.

Daddy’s Cross

For years, Daddy was a very successful farmer. Everything he did turned to gold—-until it didn’t. And when it didn’t, it didn’t in huge ways.

Many folks referred to him as a modern-day Job. And in ways, he was. He didn’t have his four children taken from him, but he did bury one boy and almost buried another when at age 19 his son ran his small car under a parked 18-wheeler, spending a month in a coma. Daddy’s heart and soul were forever marked by that experience.

On the heels of that accident came a physical malady no one–not even Mayo Clinic–could diagnose. All Daddy and those of us who loved him could do was watch him slowly and ever-so-cruelly melt away. His muscular system from his shoulders to his feet atrophied over the course of 10 years, leaving him at his death in 1971 a wheelchair and braces-bound skeleton. Although he was an impressive man always, it was during those 10 years that Daddy’s greatest influence was seen and felt. He never missed a church service, nor a Bible class which he taught without stopping from age 21 to his death at 57, nor an opportunity to raise a weak hand at his lap or hanging to his side to signal hello or to shake hands.

And on top of everything else, Daddy’s farm business, much like his muscular system, slowly atrophied. For example, when he bought expensive hail insurance, no hail was seen for miles. But when he hadn’t the money for crop insurance, his crops got hailed out. When the sun was shining, the cotton pickers were broken down. But when they were fixed, it rained. For 10 solid years, Daddy’s was the opposite of the Midas touch. Everything he touched turned to dust.

Did Daddy agonize? Yes. Did he complain or ask “Why me?” Never. In fact, when I asked him “Why you?” he said, “All I know is I trust God and believe whatever He’s doing is for my spiritual good.”

How Daddy Fathered

It wasn’t in Daddy’s makeup to force himself or his views on anyone. He thought deeply, prayed unceasingly, and presented well-formulated arguments to anyone who would listen. But he let others make up their own minds. Even his kids.


One example occurred at the beginning of my dating years. A young man “with a history” asked to come calling. My mother’s reaction: Absolutely not! But Daddy’s: “I don’t have all the answers. But I can tell you what I’ve learned by living life over the years, and I can warn you of the possibilities I see. I could forbid you to see this young man, but I know you’re old enough to figure out how to do so behind my back. That’s not what I want. I want you to consider what I have to say and make a wise decision yourself.” 

Daddy never had to forbid me to do anything. All I had to do was look at his face . . . into his tender eyes . . . and the decisions came naturally. I respected him beyond any force on Earth.

One Unforgettable Event = An Unforgettable “Father’s Day”

With college aid, I was able to attend Abilene Christian College in Abilene, Texas.

College years were emotional years for me. Living in a dorm, I was exhausted most of the time and slept the better part of the holidays at home. But I found myself in tears fairly often too. Chalk it up to exhaustion, stress, emotional roller-coasters, dating drama–who knows? All I recall is that I was often emotional. I had extremely happy, carefree days but plenty of days of disappointment too.

We had no phones in our dorm rooms. There was one pay phone provided in the hallway for each floor of each wing. Consequently, we girls found ourselves lined up, waiting for someone to get off the phone. I discovered Wednesday evenings right after church was a good time to call Mother and Daddy. This was a time when others were drifting in from their dates to church and club meetings and a perfect time for me to grab that phone booth.

An Important Phone Call That Heralded a Unique Type of Father’s Day

On one Wednesday night, I was struggling with something emotional–the what is obscured by floodwaters under the proverbial bridge. I only remember that I was “blue” as Mother used to say, and talking to Mother and Daddy helped. Our conversation, as I recall, wasn’t a lot different from other similar calls, and we said goodnight and went on to bed like many a Wednesday night.

The next morning I felt some better and went about my day–classes, socializing, cafeteria, and all the rest. 

That afternoon I was in my room studying when my “buzzer” went off. (When we had a caller in the lobby, the receptionist “buzzed” our rooms, and we went down to see who it was.)

I pictured a couple of possibilities–both guys I had been dating–and wondered what either of them would want with me in the mid-afternoon. I pushed aside the swinging door into the lobby and looked around for one of the two guys and my eyes came to rest on a graying-haired, painfully thin, far-from-fashionable older man sitting between well-dressed and cologned “jay birds” waiting for their dates.

Looking much as he had three years prior when he delivered me to ACC via U-Haul trailer–travel worn and exhausted, Daddy grinned at me.

What Are You Doing Here?

Daddy. 500 miles from home. In my dorm lobby? “What are you doing here?”

“On the phone last night . . . You sounded like you needed me.”

As Daddy’s illness progressed, his abilities dwindled. He sat in a recliner most of each day and got around outside the house in an electric wheelchair powered by one finger. He had arm braces that helped him manipulate his arms and a body brace that held his torso straight. Driving had long been out of the question.

I hugged him and looked around. “Where’s Mother?”

“At home. I wanted to do this myself . . . alone.”

“But you can’t drive 500 miles. Surely. You can’t lift your arms. You can barely lift your hands from your lap. How in the world . . .?

“I managed, babe.”

The Visit That Became Unforgettable Father’s Days

Daddy remained three full days that morphed into something way better than Father’s Day. They were a father’s day experience that has lasted a lifetime. the most memorable imaginable.

I saw him into a nearby motel and picked him up every morning for a day of “shadowing” his college junior daughter. He couldn’t hold his head up straight, but he did his best. Couldn’t walk at the pace of a college junior, but I learned I could slow down. He ate with me in the cafeteria. Went to church with me. Visited with my girlfriends and a male friend or two. And then he was gone. 

Father's Day
December 21, 1968

But Daddy left an impression and a memory of several “father’s days” that still live fifty-two years later. I will never forget his sensitivity to the emotions he heard in my voice over the phone that night in 1967. Nor will I forget the aching heart that led him to tell Mother the next morning, “I’m going to see Linda. Alone.” Or the love that drew him onto the highway, creeping along seldom-used roads, avoiding the worst of traffic, eyes fixed ahead, looking for Abilene, Texas and his girl.

I’ll never forget the sight of my deteriorating father sitting among an array of robust young men in my dorm lobby with eyes for me alone. That was some father’s day. The best.

My heart remembers. It always will. Thank you, Daddy. I love you so dearly and thank God you were my father.

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Books by Linda Brooks Davis

The Calling of Ella McFarland

The Mending of Lillian Cathleen

The Awakening of Miss Adelaide

A Rock Creek Christmas Novella Collection 

 

8 thoughts on “Father’s Day Chat

  1. Cecilia C Garcia

    Linda this is a Beautiful tribute to your Dad. I remember your Mom, Goldie, and him . He was a patient of a Raymondville dentist where I worked as a dental assistant back in the early 70’s.

     
     
    1. How sweet that you remember him that long ago, Cecilia. He died in ’71, so you treated him during the last months of his life. He was such a sweet, good man. Thanks for joining in.

       
       
  2. Marilyn R

    Linda, thank you for sharing this heartfelt and beautiful post about your dad. I had tears as I read it. There were parts that reminded me so much of dad, who has gone on to heaven too. He was an auctioneer and farmer. He worked hard to provide for his family. I remember those phone calls to him and mother from the payphone on our floor at college back then. So many sweet memories we both can cherish. “What a Day That Will Be” when we are reunited in heaven with our loved ones and our Lord and Savior for eternity. Blessings and hugs

     
     
    1. How beautiful, your comments, Marilyn. Thank you. And, yes, what a glorious day it will be!

       
       
  3. Alicia Haney

    What beautiful memories of your daddy you have, God truly blessed you richly when he put you in the arms of your parents. 🙂 My dad was also a very, very good dad and I Thank God also for giving me such a good dad. My dad and I were very close, he was an engine mechanic and I would go help him clean his tools in the garage at home, I was a tomboy having 3 older brothers and 2 younger sisters. I also had to see my dad’s health deteriorate, which was so hard. God Bless you Linda and Thank you for sharing this beautiful story of you and your dad. <3 🙂

     
     
    1. Thank you for joining in the chat, Alicia. I love your memories of your dad too. We’re both blessed!

       
       
  4. Debbey

    I am blessed to still have my Dad. He turned 90 in January. Unfortunately, he lives 12 hrs away!

     
     
    1. Hi, Debbey. Great to see you in the circle. How blessed you are to have your dad still. I hope you get to see him again soon. God bless!

       
       

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